Wine, Roses And A Candle

For the Valentine's haiku contest

 

Her lips are my wine,

Her heart like a rose bouquet,

My heart her candle.

Reviews

[Adelia Alighieri]

It's what I call 'strong, meaningful and piercing the point'. Well done!

[Tina Kline]

Very romantic and I see her lips, the wine, the rose and the candle all as a deep lovely shade of red. Outstanding. I love it!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I cannot write a Haiku.. but you can.
I love these three lines. Especially like the last line.
A heart that lights the way, keeps one safe and warm.. beautiful.
Good luck.

Chloe

[Georgia Gypsy]

Lovely Haiku, well put feelings and imagry:)

[Ed Hart]

romance is in the air

[An owl on the moon]

This is filled with the imagery of love's passion and richness... two people fulfilling their lives within each other... This is how it should be... sitting here sighing, my friend.

[Ashley]

its so cute! 100/100

[An Ordinary Woman]

romantic, pretty, tender. Very nice, Dale. Present it to your valentine and I'm sure she'll go all ga-ga on ya. nice work and good luck with the contest!

[Ladysue]

I love this...excellent haiku....this is truly beautiful...

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...her lips wine to drink, her heart a rose bouquet that gives, my heart a candle that burns for her. That is how I perceived it anyway. Lovely haiku!! Thanks for entering the Valentine's Haiku contest. :)