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A Poem by Deepwood's Hart
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heartache and bitterness make for a fun time

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I want you to go away
Because all that I ever was is swallowed up in your smile
In the curving flash of your iron eyes.

© 2010 Deepwood's Hart


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This Seems almost like a Wuthering Heights moment. Bitterness, the blackened smile and the wealthy story.

Posted 13 Years Ago


make for a fun time lol jeez that is ironically funny.

I really like this emotive dash of color.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 27, 2010
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