Why I'm lost

Why I'm lost

A Poem by Phillitup

Alone
Good
Reason
Weird
"Special"
treated
like
I'm
not
a
human
sanity
saves
me

© 2012 Phillitup


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array of words..like that

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very mysterious and a bit dark, I can relate to this poem.
Well done, it is very unique! ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

there is something about this one that i really couldn't catch, the flow of emotion is wonderful, and the one word lay out gives it a really misterious type, i like it!! thanks for the opportunity to read this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)
Direct and powerful words in the poem. I like the use of one word sentences. A lot of emotion in this poem. You are very talented. 14 words and a powerful poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

When lost, find the shortest rout home...


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) very good poem. I like it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it, "sanity saves me" :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks

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Phillitup
Phillitup

FL



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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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