Wonder

Wonder

A Poem by Phillitup

sitting with you,
laughing until I hurt,
I kind of wonder.
what does it feel like to be relieved?
of all the stress and built up pain.
the nightmares and truths that I want to do anything with but hear.
to not have to deal with it anymore.
for it to be gone,
never again here to stress me.
all to be over...
I don't want to wonder...but I do.

© 2013 Phillitup


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I think we all wonder what it would be like to be relieved of life's stress- I know I have. Throughout all stages of life- & sometimers it can overwhelm your thoughts. But thats when you put pen to paper & produce another one of your brilliant pieces of work. You have such an amazing talent & will accomplish great things in your life. You have an ability to express your emotions in a way that speaks to your readers. Thank you sharing this incredibly deep, uniquely written piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thank you SO much Jenn!



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I think we all wonder what it would be like to be relieved of life's stress- I know I have. Throughout all stages of life- & sometimers it can overwhelm your thoughts. But thats when you put pen to paper & produce another one of your brilliant pieces of work. You have such an amazing talent & will accomplish great things in your life. You have an ability to express your emotions in a way that speaks to your readers. Thank you sharing this incredibly deep, uniquely written piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thank you SO much Jenn!
I wonder a lot, too. This is really awesome Philby; it makes me think, ponder, wonder. I loved it :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks
I'd rather not have any reason to wonder. wonderful write, Dell!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks Annabelle! I would rather not think or wonder sometimes to but my mind forces me to wander an.. read more

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Added on February 3, 2013
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Phillitup

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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