Vengeful God

Demon souls they clawed
at the martyrs for jihad
Games of give and take
The catastrophes we make
 Under a vengeful God

Reviews

[Brian Angeles]

This is an interesting and intense piece of work never seen it before. Very good job Ricochet.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Brian

[reeyce smythe wilder]

A very intense piece portrayed with just five lines.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you reeyce

[Corset]

That is such a forceful image, the baby holding the gun, the scent of dangerous innocence, so tragic, so unbelievablably wrong. Excellent work baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Corset

[Will]

Powerful write, Mark. You really send a strong message here, that the way some interpret God is ghastly and often frightening. Well done

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Will

[Pryde Foltz]

Down with any god that would put a weapon in a child's hand. Fantastic write, Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Pryde

[Tom]

So many different interpretations of God, that's the source of problem I believe !

You make my point for me so poetically well my friend !

[Baby Ricochet]

It one of the sources for sure. Thank you Tom

[Jack...]

very sad, but true. Nice one sir.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Jack