Oh! It Started Raining

a brief about rain

             

Dense clouds cover the shining sun.

The morning is turning into night.

Winds blow fast; pretty umbrellas are seen 

outside.

Animals run to the shelter.

The hot day is vanishing they say.

The thundering sound, lightening in sky scares; I hid under my desk.

All doors are shut and windows are closed, 

mine too.

OH! It started raining!

The fine smell of dust. What a pleasure!

It’s only cool and cool.

It’s becoming heavy with every boring  

second.

Today my friends didn't come to play.

Has someone forgotten to close tap in the 

sky?

The window is full with droplets.

The sun glows again in the clear sky.

Rainbow smiles with seven colors. What a scenario!

OH! It stopped raining!

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ah lovely one here.....liked how u called the clouds...asked them to rain..nd then alllowed them go away :p :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks

[Frieda P]

Oh I felt like dancing in your poetry! Sweet one.

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks

[Robert Strzalko]

Thanks for inviting me to read it. Rain always has an emotion to it and it's clear that it made you feel something that was special to you.

[Devanshu Rajput]

ya................thanks

[Joan*Eckhart]

I love the rain. I loved this. It was very imaginative.

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks

[Aehr]

I like the way you described the events which came and went with the arriving and going away of the rain. Good job. :D

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks

[Renée]

Nice visuals of the event !

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks

[spiritwind]

This was like being inside the mind of a child! Loved it!

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks

[gombeggar]

i see why u r putting colors and different fonts to yer writing...but you don't need that...you're words speak plenty

[Devanshu Rajput]

really?

[Leslie Philibert]

A young person`s poem full of energy, light and water ! Very good.

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks

[Nick.B]

Quite interesting tale that shows a great imaginary towards nature...good job

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks for reading