Lost Beyond Reason

Lonliness embraces me,

 

On most days I cry,

 

Still I continue down this long path

 

That takes me no where fast

 

Besides this hopelessness that haunts me

Every day of my life.

Your memories fill my every second

 

Only to remind me that you are gone

 

Now i walk endlessly

 

Down this broken road,

 

Reasons unknown to me

 

Even though I try to remember why.

 

Another missing piece of this puzzle

 

Seems to elude my every thought

 

Only now do I realize

 

Nothing can bring you back alive

 

Reviews

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

Very well done

[Amor-de-angel]

I love this acrostic. sad but so beautifully written.It flows lovely too.

[Fantasyfairy]

A beautiful acrostic, but so full of pain and sorrow. Death is a part of life we all must live with, and the death of a relationship is no easier to bear than the death of a loved one. XX

[Shane Patrick]

an emotional acrostic, and probably the best one I have ever read... this is just pieced together perfectly wonderous write!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A wonderful acrostic.....very sad and full of feeling!

[Marie]

Emotional and very nicely written.

[Angela Talbert]

Wow, this is very good. Very sad and deeply emotional.

[Jenny Davis]

Awe, this is so sad, Diana...yet it is written very creatively and to the point....very sweet :)

[Julia Taylor]

This makes me want to cry, considering the fact i already am , so it made me cry some more!
Right now i'm feeling this exact way. and its something i can't put into words. so thank you for doing it so beautifully

[Stacy A. Foster]

Hmmm... a lost love and a broken heart or someone sent off to war, etc.? There's more to this than meets the eye I think. Loneliness, worry, confusion, and feeling lost are only some of the emotions shared in this.

Nice acrostic!
Stacy