Lost Beyond Reason

Lonliness embraces me,

 

On most days I cry,

 

Still I continue down this long path

 

That takes me no where fast

 

Besides this hopelessness that haunts me

Every day of my life.

Your memories fill my every second

 

Only to remind me that you are gone

 

Now i walk endlessly

 

Down this broken road,

 

Reasons unknown to me

 

Even though I try to remember why.

 

Another missing piece of this puzzle

 

Seems to elude my every thought

 

Only now do I realize

 

Nothing can bring you back alive

 

Reviews

[Nick Erickson]

Well written. I enjoy your writing and how easily it seems to flow across the page. I finished reading this, strangely enough, happily thinking of loved ones gone. Well done.

[Donald Meikle]

It's a well written acrostic with an excellent ending . I would suggest beside rather than besides. How's that for nitpicking? one little letter!

[Robert Luna]

You step so easily into a mindset of sadness. Which in itself shows the power of your writing ability knowing that you are a upbeat person. As always purely a pleasure to read your words. i hope you are feeling better.

Great Job!!!!

[A. L. Robinson]

Beautiful piece, as always :)

[Chillbear Latrigue]

Very Sad. Is there a name for this format? I liked the poem very much. It flowed nicely.

[Dezaraye]

This is so well written, but so sad and sorrowful. My heart started to ache as a I read this.

[H. A. M.]

Dark and depressing. Full of despair. The ghost on the road makes it plain though. She's just going nowhere like a lost soul. Very Poe-ish write.

[[Starshine] Faerie]

Oh my word! That's incredible! Not only a beautiful poem but it spells out Lost Beyond Reason as well!
I really enjoyed reading this!

[Fran Marie]

A wonderfully penned Acrostic~WeLl DonE!~Fran Marie

[Tabitha Kaufman]

This is very sad, a feeling no one really want to accept. Very brave to write it and share it with us. It was written very well

Tabitha