belonging.

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there's so much i should have said,

said the voices in my head.

and life is just keepin on.

before i knew,

or thought it through,

i gave the wrong 

me to you...

these days i just think,

over and over;

rehashing this or that.

 -and i can't seem to decide

was it fate, how i failed,

was it fate to be so wrong

so i'll just put thingz 

where they belong.

i'll wander slowly,

searching my mind

for the peace, in me,

i've left behind....

and how the mirrors deceive us.

they let us think who we are.

and though our lovers believe us,

it only goes--

and, it only goes so far.

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Reviews

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I'll simply point and say "that guy over there...is a damn good wordsmith. You paint a vivid picture with your words. I'm an old fart, don't like 'z' subbing for 's', but your writing is pure, and true to you. Great job!
"i gave the wrong me to you"...Brilliant!

[kait]

your a really good writer im new on here and hope to be as good as you someday.

[Tate Morgan]

It is true we change at times to accomodate it is so much easier to lead by your own thoughts and see who follows

[Katie Louise Hughes]

two thumbs up! :) Thanks

[Shelby Baker]

I like the poem
nice flow and writing.
only thing is you gotta capitalize your '"I"s and I'm's
keepin & thingz: Some people might complain about that but its your own style of writing so it's up to you. I do the same thing in some of my poems.
good job