Autumn Haiku

Dirt on my feet
Trail of a wanderer
I feel alone

Author's Note

Haiku is a genre of Japanese poetry consisting on 5,7,5 syllable poems, this translates to short line, long line, short line in English, I hope you enjoy it.
(to find out more about Haiku check http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku)

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

Your poetry is so simple, yet tells complex things. I think you said it perfectly in your profile

"I believe that writing is the art of telling complex things with simple words. Sadly, most writing today seems to be complex words telling simple things..."

Its true. And you do a wonderful job by telling the complex in a simple way. I love it :)

[Manda]

Wow this was simply yet so much happened in these few lines. I could imagaine so much more beyond these lines. Simply beautiful! Well done! 100/100

[QuothCorvid]

I could see you wandering a path through a wood afire with the colors of all... lovely!