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Oh this old but a personal fav... positive cynicism... GOT THAT!!! Positive thought people!!!!

to see with clarity,

sieve through the muddle,

and enjoy free thought.

make sense out of truth,

acknowledge all facts

and base all judgements

upon these beleifs,

stay true to your goals

and better humanity.

if you perform these acts

to the best of your ability,

you will be rewarded,

by the powers that be,

with a vinyl, padded room

all to yourself.

 

          july 95

 

 

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

What? This starts out somewhat like a mantra and winds up in a asylum,,, Burn out? Too busy looking after everyone else to be looking after ones self? Well I'm pleased its dated 95, at least that was a while ago.. Good twist though, and a good message as well really.

[April Child]

Haha thats a great ending. Fun piece, I thought it was philosphical and then it just laughed in my face and I laughed right back!

[SM Davis]

Can completely relate....and I don't believe that's always a bad thing. LOL nicely done. I agree with Tania.

[Tania Leigh]

I love it! A nice twist that I didn't expect after reading your note he he
Great write!