Mr. Mysterious

And you keep up the aura

surrounding yourself

in a sense of mystery.

The ladies are entranced,

but should they try to get closer

the mystery isn't over.

You'll say no more.

No more.

And it seems like it works

for you.

But who are you?

Author's Note

Don't worry. This is not a real person.

Reviews

[Michael]

This is a very playful poem. One small suggestion, try and work the word mystery into the last line of the third stanza. It would add to the playful overall.

[Diana]

I didn't wish to give him a name any more. Mystery is often undefined. Interesting commentary, though. Thank you, Michael.

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Mystery lies in the beholder now its their battle to see.

[Diana]

Thank you, again.

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Welcome:) my friend

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, people who hide behind a facade of "coolness" are ones you need to keep a safe distance away from! They are mysterious and many are drawn to the mystery, but it is not worth it. Great character study here. Lydi**

[Diana]

Yes, indeed. Thanks, Lydi.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is a person to be careful of ...shrouded in mystery, so what you see is not likely what you get.

and he could be dangerous to the heart.

[Diana]

Thank you, Jacob. Luckily not a real person.

[Sami Khalil]

The million dollar question. When you solve the mstery please let us know or publish a poem...Excellent...:).....................

[Diana]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ...:)........................