Until You Were Gone

I didn’t realize how much I needed you

until you were gone,

until you were gone.

I didn’t realize how much I needed you

until I sang that song,

sang that song.

You should have missed me

while you were gone,

while you were gone.

This is so long.

So long.......................................

Reviews

[Thesecuts]

I wanna remember this poem forever. it kind of reminds me of how I felt.

[Diana]

Thank you. Glad you liked it!

[~]

Separation will never be easy. Whether we know it will come, or it takes us by surprise there is nothing that will keep our hearts from hurting.
A lot of sentiments packed in this one Diana! :D

[Diana]

Thank you. You're an excellent writer and reviewer to boot!

[~]

smiling ** :D thank you sweetie!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the musicality caused by the repetition..."gone gone gone"----

[Diana]

Thank you, Jacob. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. An amazing song that has been due for so long. Enjoyed till the last drop of ink...Excellent...:).....

[Diana]

Yes, very much a song. Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....