Eight Years in Time

Eight Years in Time

A Poem by Diana

I don't cry over men any more,
but I'll cry for you my dear.

Best friend of mine,
8 years in time.

Something of yours,
something of mine.

Tick-tock 
Tick-tock.

Put the memories on a gold clasp chain
'Round my calico blue collar.

Gnawing at the wormholes of my heart,
I once again know what it is to feel.

© 2015 Diana


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Relatable for me because I recently lost a best friend

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

8 Years Ago

So sorry. I definitely know the feeling...
Tamika Finley

8 Years Ago

We'll get through it together. Just keep writing and I will too
Diana

8 Years Ago

True story!
The poem told a sad story. We do learn what is true or not with time and age. I like the story and lesson told. A strong ending to the powerful poetry Diana.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote. I wasn't quite sure how the poem was going to turn out...when the feelings are s.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Diana.
It's really hard to miss someone special in your life. You described your feelings very nice, good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

8 Years Ago

Thank you. Agreed, very hard...
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Ohh, this was painful to read. it resonates with me and a friend i lost on a battle with cancer.. i love that imagery of the gold clasp chain.. a safe place to save the memory and the feelings that went with it.


Posted 8 Years Ago


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Diana

8 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you could relate.
friendships are stronger than love affairs...they run deep....and they let us feel....when those other relationships wear thin and wear us out...we grow cold to them...friendships warm the soul...and gnaw at those wormholes...

well said.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diana

8 Years Ago

Truth. Thank you, Jacob.

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