Welcome to Reality

I'm tired of being alone.

I'd tell you to hold me...

but I'm not so sure.

Girls aren't supposed to make their desires known.

Welcome to reality.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of an Al Green song..."i'm so tired of being alone" and if he can express that, then i think anyone, regardless of gender, should be able to do the same.
that needs to be the reality...if men can make desires known, why can't women?

i think the uncertainty lies more in the issues of trust. and probably for good reason.

[Diana]

Ahh...trust. Not sure I know what that is. Excellent point. Thanks, Jacob!

[Beccy]

'Girls aren't supposed to make their desires known,' how truly that is an echo of the way it so often is; but then again, and just as often, it only takes a glance from beneath lowered lashes.

Loved this! Beccy.

[Diana]

Thank you!

[terry smith]

And boys are afraid to ask. so we are all alone.

[Diana]

Amen to that!

[Jen Walters]

Reality is what we make of it, but a lot of times this poem directly expresses what it actually is. It's a shame too really, because we all should want a better reality than this. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem

[Diana]

Reality is what is more than anything else. Thank you for your insight!

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm tired of being alone.
I'd tell you to hold me...
but I'm not so sure.

Girls aren't supposed to make their desires known.
Welcome to reality."

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome to the arms of love reality where desires are manifested between the two regardless...... An excellent write...:)

[Diana]

Thanks, Sami! Good to see you...

[Sami Khalil]

Same here. You are welcome...:).................

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, they are supposed to, but when they do, it is not always received well. Reality.....people all have their own versions. I liked this, Diana. Lydi**

[Diana]

Amen to that, love! Thanks, Lydi!