Women

musing

 

                              Women

     Women are warm, wonderful and soft

     and women are whimsical,and often aloft

     and women are feline, and quite debonair

     and women are vessells, filled up with care

     and women are sensual, sexy and sublime

     and women are tranquil,when loves past prime

     and women are vibrant, vivacious and alive 

     and women are the nectar, that soothes my eyes

     and women are coursing, dancing and strong

     and women are my melody, when my souls alone

     and women are tempered,by the fires of repression

     and women are human, and not a possession

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

I'll go along with that last line! Without meaning to be facetious I rather think you've learned these feelings over time .. and what a wonderful list it would make for young lads 'learning the ropes'.

We women aren't too bad and your poem proves a point or two.

[lindalou]

Beautiful! easy to read, lovely strong words
very good write, I like it