Dancing, unaware of crouching birds...

for Donna.

"Hello universe"

it's Earth calling.

"Who"

"It's the earth"

remember me?

Reviews

[Cherrie]

The dance of time and space, should always make time for a, hello.

[h d e rushin]

Oh yes.....And I always do, even to strangers passing on the street. I consider it as one of the main avenues of sensation. The earth is a smaller place today than yesterday....thanks Cherrie/ dana

[Robert Trakofler]

LOL earth has been sending us a message for quite a while now:/ Seems the messages are becoming eviction notices lately:) ever the indelible... Dana

[h d e rushin]

I believe, with my silly self, in other planets like ours where people of different races find a common ground like the poets of this earth do....thank you my friend....dana

[Robert Trakofler]

I always thought (and I will give this one to you for free:) .... if i ever opened up a coffee shop I would call it common grounds for that very reason! love your heart Dana

[Beccy]

So tiny, that to them a pinhead is a universe in itself; and yet the destruction it has caused to the very fabric of our society almost beggars belief.

Time as you say dana, to become aware and remember earth.

Stay safe, stay well.

Beccy.

[h d e rushin]

that little boy of yours is becoming the inventory of this universe. It has to be protected from plundering personalities.....love you....dana

[Einstein Noodle]

interesting ... profound isolation in your poem ... lots of humility too ... who ever do we think we are .. to be important ... and the "universe" ... our endless ignorance eh!? as planets spin and whirl in cosmic dance ... who are the crouching birds??? ;) i can only say, dana, ... that I remember you :)))))))))) stay safe ...be well!

[h d e rushin]

dearest brother...what has this virus taught us about the universe? It is the instance of our observation, our act of recognition is best observed by instruments and contraptions and not by the feeble, sense and sensibilities of our awful selves. If a virus can so easily wipe us all out, then the "us" we thought were unconquerable, was just an easy push over after all. Thanks for your insight this morning and you be safe also....dana

[Einstein Noodle]

an amazing thing the frailty and tenacity of life

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but i do think i am hearing those Byrds, singing "Mr. Tambourine Man"
and all the other animals are following.

[h d e rushin]

haha...We're all singing together my friend...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am trying so hard to remember, dana,
but it's just vaguely familiar but not really coming to me.
j.

[h d e rushin]

it doesn't look the same these days does it Jacob. When we pass our neighbors on the street, we try not to make eye contact....What has happened to us in such a short time? thank god for poetry...dana