Liar

liar liar

a simple word

comlicated by the many faces used to define it.

they peer at me through veils of black lace,

i have yet to believe a thing they say

they intend to trap me,like a predator with its prey

but i see right through them.

liar liar

close your lips

you rip open old wounds with false promises,

and your eyes remain open when you slip her a kiss

she doesnt deserve this,

but you do,

liar.

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

liar liar
a simple word
complicated by the many faces used to define it.
they peer at me through veils of black lace,
i have yet to believe a thing they say
they intend to trap me,like a predator with its prey
but i see right through them.
liar liar
close your lips
you rip open old wounds with false promises,
and your eyes remain open when you slip her a kiss
she doesnt deserve this,
but you do,
liar.

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It speaks for itself...but this can work both ways...its not a one way street in a relationship...if both parties are no in equal terms...one is bond to stray...and the other finds out the harsh reality of it all...I edited --- above for your reference...

[destiny]

yes this is true, but I wasn't sure how to portray both parties in that phrase, so I just went with the female perspective of the situation.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

the perspective you did it in is fine...I was merely taking the view from my angle...

[little thoughts]

oh nice one girl !
i have yet to believe a thing they say
they intend to trap me,like a predator with its prey
but i see right through them
beautiful lines

[destiny]

thank you ! much appreciated