Ribbons

I will wrap you around my finger,

like the ribbon in my hair.

show me that you care,

but don't tell me,

I might take advantage of those words.

I will laugh like sweet music,

taste like honey and red wine,

drip my words down your spine and hypnotize you.

I'd like to say I didn't mean to,

but I know exactly what im doing.

kiss my lips of pink velvet,

run your hands along my thighs

and I will sigh.

but I cant really feel it,

i'm just getting you right where I want you,

and when you're finally in that place,

I will break your heart,

tear you apart,

and eat your soul.

but don't blame it on me,

because this is all that I know.

 I will feel no remorse,

i'll sit back and enjoy the show.

and when its over ,

ill change the channel.

call me an animal,

but deep inside I know you know,

i'm just the female version of

you.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I will wrap you around my finger,
like the ribbon in my hair.

show me that you care,
but don't tell me,
I might take advantage of those words.

I will laugh like sweet music,
taste like honey and red wine,
drip my words down your spine and hypnotize you.

I'd like to say I didn't mean to,
but I know exactly what I'm doing.

kiss my lips of pink velvet,
run your hands along my thighs
and I will sigh.

but I cant really feel it,
i'm just getting you right where I want you,
and when you're finally in that place,
I will break your heart,
tear you apart,
and eat your soul.

but don't blame it on me,
because this is all that I know.

I will feel no remorse,
i'll sit back and enjoy the show.

and when it's over,
I'll change the channel.
call me an animal,
but deep inside I know you know,
I'm just the female version of
you.

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Seems you like the word "thigh" in your work...just comes put that way with the two --- I've read so far...this has a primal instinct feel to it...as you lay it down the lines...and the ending admits your remission...again...I believe the structure is off...and did edit again to conform with what I believe you wanted the reader to experience....

[destiny]

thank you for all the reviews and opinions, they have been very helpful ! I appreciate you taking the time to read my works. and yes I do like the word thigh lol I believe maybe it's the spelling.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Owl's Wing]

I love it! great job...again, you grasped the exact emotions and pulled them into lines that make sene

[destiny]

thanks! lol I wasn't sure how I felt about this one but decided why not.