Kings & Queens

Kings & Queens

A Poem by Liz-z

I adore you, never forget that
I smile at your charming acts
Your confidence
And beauty
Has me attached

You admire me, I can't forget it
Your touch is tender and kind
You love me for who I am
You are just so divine

Our passion towards each other, indescribable
 
Kiss me delightfully
While I'll hug you tightly
Embrace me and I'll set up the night

Our connections to the rest of the world
It infuriates us
At times
It's all just a contest
And none can refuse

But have no fear
Our trust and loyalty
Will over come us
The honesty we share
Will protect us

Our emotions are a match
Boundaries are set
Together
Possessive and passionate
We make it through it all 
As
The Kings & Queens of the Jungle

© 2010 Liz-z


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Has an empowering feeling to it, especially towards the end.

"Our emotions are a match
Boundaries are set
Together
Possessive and passionate
We make it through it all
As
The Kings & Queens of the Jungle"

^^ My favourite part, especially the last line.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This was a good poem. I agree that it was empowering. I love the flow as the poem too. Good job on this. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was very beautiful! is this related to tarazan or George and Ursela from george of the Jungle? lol, jk! I really do like it! Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the line - embrace me and I'll set up the night. Beautiful piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This describes how every relationship should be. So touching and heart felt I'm glad I ahve read this write. It has enlightened my day. The last stanza shows strengh you have being with this person. I find that really sweet. This poem pretty much is as perfect as it can get. I'm glad to not see it rushed or over the top.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Has an empowering feeling to it, especially towards the end.

"Our emotions are a match
Boundaries are set
Together
Possessive and passionate
We make it through it all
As
The Kings & Queens of the Jungle"

^^ My favourite part, especially the last line.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me way too much of me and my ex. I still love him and he still loves me but it wouldn't work. But this is exactly how we were when we were together. This was a wonderful poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:D love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amazing poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AMAZINGING. it is sweet and is full of emotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is was sooo sweet omg, I love this, you are a fantastic writer! keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I love to write, even though I could use some more practice, constructive criticism perhaps? :) I love music, the end! THE TEN COMMANDMENTS OF GERARD WAY 1.thou shall never let.. more..

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