Second hand warmth

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I can see the sun 
shining through my windows today
but I can't feel it, I'm in another place

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

This brief poem communicates a lot in few words. There is a somberness to the work, a feeling of being disconnected from joy. I might even say we are here seeing the world through the eyes of one alone and depressed. Still, the fact that the sun can still be seen is grounds for hope. When all is night help is needed.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Thanks very much John

[Jade]

I like this write, emotional really

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Thanks jade.

[Chris Shaw]

Brevity which says much. You are in a cold place . No warmth in your heart to appreciate the sun's warmth. The sun can't reach you. Nice little piece Edie.

Chris

[Edie Blue Starfish]

thank you very much Chris!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow yes, literal and figurative.
the warmth through the glass not the same as direct love,
and being loved sometimes feel that way...warmth, but not quite the real thing, the direct thing.
love what you do with three lines.
j.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

thanks Jacob, I appreciate that :)

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A super cool poem. What other place? Even warmth of love is good. Thumbs up.

pls pleez review/ comment, give your thoughts on my newest poem too.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

thx for the comment!

[gram linski]

Cold to the bone
ice like thoughts lingering
not even heat from a burning Sun
can warm the hearth
of the other place

[Edie Blue Starfish]

such a poetic comment, I love it

[Robert Trakofler]

well get back here silly theirs sun to be shined and dreams to be mined gleams from beams to be refined reflections pon your splendorous fine:)

[Edie Blue Starfish]

what a lovely and 'chipper' greeting this morning.
thank you for bringing your shine, bunny. :)

[Robert Trakofler]

Morning Edie :) big bunny hug to you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This short piece has great pathos as the protagonist describes the nature of the day but suggests they themselves are far from feeling sunny in disposition. Nicely penned in a short verse.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

thank you for that comment John

[Einstein Noodle]

sucks to be numb says i! to be in a glorious day and not feel it is tragedy in spades :((( all our "up" triggers have no effect .. ouch! another poem that gives me just enough to imagine it all ..well done says i ..
E.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

I appreciate that, thank you

[Wondering Mind]

Lost and found in thought or fantasy: abstract

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting