YOU ARE POISON (THE FECES OF HELL)

For the really evil

You’re rancid poison
You’re venomous toxic and sick
You’re a surprise never ever welcomed
Like finding sores on your prick
I tried not to be poisoned
but you envenomed me from the moment we met
Your snide crappy attitude
Emotionally made me sick
You depraved demoralizing jackass
You enjoy hurting with love
You burn away resistance
And give peace & humanity a shove
This poem may seem hateful
It may seem like I’m just really mad
But the people who read this don't know you
All your crap, your filth, and your bad
All the guys you hurt in your torture
The lies you told to our hearts
or the evil twisted dark alter
On which you tore all our hearts apart
You seething sickening herpes
You contamination of the purity
In a soul
You’re the feces in Hell's fiery toilet
You’re a subversion of all heaven's goals
This disease you gave me is forever
You knew
And still didn't care
You took away my innocence
When you trapped me inside your snare
You envenomed me with your poison
And I will endure it for all of my life
Given to me by a Lecher
A Demon I once gave my life
Yes I wrote this in anger
But I know you will never care
Because the true definition of Evil
Greets you  in the mirror when you stare!

 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

Author's Note

This is a very personal sounding poem that is not personal! I was writing in a lobby and this couple started arguing. The conversation was just wild! it was so visceral that I thought fists were going to fly! The guy walked off and the women ran off in tears and I started writing..this is what came out! WOW!

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Holy cats, I feel like I just got hit in the gut, you certainly do these rants to perfection Eddie!

[Constance Payne]

WoW is exactly right. I was going to advise you to consider getting this person out of your life that you deserve better....but that is the counselor in my attempting to help.
The words written in red are angry and increase the intensity of this--good choice.

"This disease you gave me is forever
You knew
And still didn't care
You took away my innocence"

This line touched me....Disease....I thought STD or worse in my minds eye.

Powerfully written.

[redflutterby]

Wow is right....this is a viscious punch to the throat. Brutal and precise in its wording!! I'm sure there's been more then a few who felt this way about someone in their life.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol seems current! I love this, the reason why even it is a rant but still it is something meaningful and worth to read, i wish I can tag this to the witch lol :) thanks brother the message is very clear and powerful :) thanks for sharing.

[Eddie Phillips]

Please comment. Bad or good I would appreciate the feedback. I am new on the site.