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TAKE THE PILL

TAKE THE PILL

A Poem by Eddie Phillips
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There are mental illnesses, but we have to ensure that our children are really ill before we just take an opinion that will affect their entire life.

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They tell our kids to take the pills; it will help them to forget
It will give them inner peace and take away all regret
They won't remember their actions; won't dwell on their wrongs
If we give them the pills, they will fit in and then belong
They won't feel too hyper; however it won't slow them down
Just give them the pills, its scientific and ethically sound
What they never really tell you is the Hell these pills can bring
All the neurotic nightmares and silent stanchioned screams
When they are suppressed on pills nobody really sees their pain
They drown in a waterhole of emotion because someone stole the drain
We are building a nation of the repressed; we have taken away their drive
We say it’s for their good but without drive they can't survive
Millions upon millions are addicted to these behavioral pills
While billionaires are laughing madly; profiteering off their ills
They say give your child the pill; it will help them to belong
But I ask you to really ponder... Can you take it when things go wrong?

 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

© 2013 Eddie Phillips


Author's Note

Eddie Phillips
I have a friend who was told to put his child on behavioral drugs. The kid was fine before the drugs and now has problems that will last his whole life.

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Behavioral meds no doubt have their place but they are blatantly over prescribed by MD's caught between a rock and a hard place expected to "fix" complex behavior problems with a prescription pad.
This is a great poem Eddie. It's along the lines of the stuff I write about

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

10 Years Ago

Thanks bro that means a lot coming from you because you write some pretty compelling stuff. Thanks .. read more



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If we perhaps want to stifle creativity and if people are happy (I am aware of the contradiction) just being grey. With no ups or downs then yes. There is a wider democratic moral issue here as well as a personal one.
On the one hand people never grow being safe. The journey is always important but safety also is.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I absolutely agree, Eddie - I see kids who are medicated each year, and I want to shake their parents and their doctors - I see it in adults, too. This is a culture that says to take a pill for everything, instead of teaching people to deal with Life as it comes. Well thought out, and very well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dear Eddie, kindred spirit, a soldier for on high. Keep it up my friend as there is much work to be done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

10 Years Ago

I agree my brother. It is a frightening time when we prescribe before knowing the problem. Much pr.. read more
Behavioral meds no doubt have their place but they are blatantly over prescribed by MD's caught between a rock and a hard place expected to "fix" complex behavior problems with a prescription pad.
This is a great poem Eddie. It's along the lines of the stuff I write about

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

10 Years Ago

Thanks bro that means a lot coming from you because you write some pretty compelling stuff. Thanks .. read more
Pills brainwash people, man. I know from experience, they can turn you into a drone or a hyped up fool. Good expressionism.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

10 Years Ago

To be subdued is to be held down. When doctors tell people that the pills will keep their childs em.. read more
I saw on facebook someone said "Depression is the most widely diagnosed disorder while exercise and self discipline are the least accepted forms of medication" Too many pills are given out to people who think that life is supposed to be fun all the time

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

10 Years Ago

We are living in the wonder pill society. We take pills for everything and have people with devasta.. read more
'What they never really tell you is the Hell these pills can bring
All the neurotic nightmares and silent stanchioned screams' these two lines are so powerful, not only can I relate but I get the message and do agree. glad you wrote your thoughts out for the world to finally understand this . Great job . much love

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eddie Phillips

10 Years Ago

I thank you for reading this. I am passionate about it myself because I have seen the devastation t.. read more

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Eddie Phillips
Eddie Phillips

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Writer, Scholar, Martial Artist, Poet, etc. I write everything. Whatever is on my heart comes through my pen. I do not limit myself to only write what I think. I write what I feel. I write a lot .. more..

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