Shakespeare/Hummingbird

Shakespeare/Hummingbird

A Poem by SilentDreamer

He is no Shakespeare.

Neither am I.

All the words that I write

Don't quite

Seem right.

 

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She was a hummingbird-

Quiet-

But the thoughts

Murmered inside her head.

© 2012 SilentDreamer


Author's Note

SilentDreamer
Just some stuff I wrote for Creative Writing. They don't really go together but I decided to put them on the same page.

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This is very Unique, I like it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


VERY creative :DDDD I really like it alot

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is really good. good job!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


They do actually fit together, or maybe it's just me but the two really stand well side by side.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it. Unique and creative. =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Links are where our mind finds them - I saw several.

What is bad about Creative Writing is that its someone else's ideas that you create.

Posted 7 Years Ago


As they say, "silent waters run deep".
And noone should be expected to be or do things like anyone other than oneself. We don't really need another Shakespeare - who would be quite misplaced in our time - but more originals.
Overall, two nice, short works.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it this way and it works..well done..xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very creative and perfect :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quiet .. With so much just beneath the surface .. Lovely ..


Jasmine ..

Posted 7 Years Ago



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