A Poem by SilentDreamer

He is no Shakespeare.

Neither am I.

All the words that I write

Don't quite

Seem right.





She was a hummingbird-


But the thoughts

Murmered inside her head.

© 2012 SilentDreamer

Author's Note

Just some stuff I wrote for Creative Writing. They don't really go together but I decided to put them on the same page.

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This is very Unique, I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago

VERY creative :DDDD I really like it alot

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is really good. good job!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

They do actually fit together, or maybe it's just me but the two really stand well side by side.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like it. Unique and creative. =)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Links are where our mind finds them - I saw several.

What is bad about Creative Writing is that its someone else's ideas that you create.

Posted 8 Years Ago

As they say, "silent waters run deep".
And noone should be expected to be or do things like anyone other than oneself. We don't really need another Shakespeare - who would be quite misplaced in our time - but more originals.
Overall, two nice, short works.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like it this way and it works..well done..xo

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very creative and perfect :D

Posted 8 Years Ago

Quiet .. With so much just beneath the surface .. Lovely ..

Jasmine ..

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 22, 2012
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