BROKEN

An indescribable damaged contraction bleeds tears to chase the liquor ingested

Mind states numb as thoughts run disturbed
A hand of depression dips pictures of remembering into a dissolve
Ache…
Behind stolen powers beautiful obsessions become nightmares
Against universal language weakness becomes unnerving
It’s a constant…
An infinity of a fatal unique rage that burns anguished questions of
“Why did you have to do this to me?”
Flame…
It deepens with a richly colored sharp tip that draws downward slicing the soul
With every breath taken it leaves wounds that contain powers of confusion
Sensations… deluded 

Author's Note

inspired by a friend... cant help but feel for her

Reviews

[BlueDreams]

Its a crunch to heart.. Touched hardly.. i could feel the pain residing in this craft..Great job .. :-)

[Arielle Ann]

rich vocabulary and detailed description/ minute introspection on the emotions of another....each line carries that weight,that intense pain/the sensation slices through the reader...I could feel the deep hurt bursting out in your words...your friend will be happy to know someone cares for her that much...thanks for the share :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great word choice that built up emotions through and through! Nicely done!

Such a deep and clever read. I felt it profoundly. I like the word choise you used, so excellent!!

[Emily Rae]

a deep and powerful read, I could feel the deranged pain

[Art]

you are a true friend...when one can write for the other and console it shows the deep compassion of the Soul...nicely written poem...

[KAREN]

Very strong poem that slices each emotion, nicely done!

[Lily Mae]

You have expressed these type emotions well..x Strong and deep.. well written..x

[TawnyBlueStar]

lovely :D
"richly colored sharp tip that draws downward slicing the soul"
really nice poem
and the picture goes well with it :)

[Rene Velez]

Turmoil and loves darker side...this a good one, I like the wordplay and choice of construction...well done Em.