BROKEN

An indescribable damaged contraction bleeds tears to chase the liquor ingested

Mind states numb as thoughts run disturbed
A hand of depression dips pictures of remembering into a dissolve
Ache…
Behind stolen powers beautiful obsessions become nightmares
Against universal language weakness becomes unnerving
It’s a constant…
An infinity of a fatal unique rage that burns anguished questions of
“Why did you have to do this to me?”
Flame…
It deepens with a richly colored sharp tip that draws downward slicing the soul
With every breath taken it leaves wounds that contain powers of confusion
Sensations… deluded 

Author's Note

inspired by a friend... cant help but feel for her

Reviews

[stars are far]

This was so greatly done sis :-)
Keep that up

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you introduce the question Why...into a very dense text,it makes the poem unusual and dramatic.Good work.

[Priscilla Sayers]

We can always remeber a time when we felt the pain, the loss, and far too often for some. To be able to relate to another then bring it to the screen and pass that feeling on to others is a talent! Well Done! Dig it!

[Thea]

You found a really great inspiration in this poem...A sad but beautiful poem...
:)))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"It deepens with a richly colored sharp tip that draws downward slicing the soul With every breath taken it leaves wounds that contain powers of confusion"~What an profound description! You have written this with intensity...Nice write!

[Muse]

I feel your inspiration. Sad..but you penn it so beautifully. xo