THE QUIET

Its in the silence we begin to know what we truly feel

I don’t like the quiet…

It seems it’s within this soundless

Fact rears up

Half chained

Half awake

Taps you on your shoulder

Starts talking of things you push away

Reminding that you can run from your heart

But can’t hide

Assuring that such purity

Won’t move unless satisfied

I don’t like the quiet…

Author's Note

eehhh..... I dunno....

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I don't like the quiet either, excellent Emphasis.

[Siddhartha]

It's always difficult in the quiet. For when the external cacophonies die away, the inner tumult rears its head.... It's difficult but then so very rewarding... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The words are true in this poem. We need to be needed and loved. We also need to give love and kindness. I like the way you described the need and desire of love and friendship. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[joshua deathdealer]

A lot to chew on here. Fabulous work.

[ghost writer]

the quiet makes you hear your imagination..an intelligent write.

[Manpreet]

Vow! nice imagery, Lovely work!

[Lily Mae]

Oh I sunk into this one. Silence has that ability to hold the fear factor.. What will our minds conjure up and pull forward while we are trying to simply be... That's why people see me running in circles like a dog chasing it's tail.. maybe the silence won't catch up ;) excellent write sis:) xo

[Thea]

Yeah, so true...I don't like silence as well...Because whenever it's quite, I start to remember some things that I've buried in the ground already, haha! And I hate it... XD
A very creative poem! Well done!
:)))

[S. Michael Long]

Original, brilliant, I personally would add nothing, and take nothing away, (: nice work! -s

[Honey54]

LOVE IT! but i happen to like the quiet lol...I love the stong use of words and meaning...