January 5th

January 5th

A Chapter by Emunah June.

January 5th

 

I got hit because I didn't write yesturday.

 

"Consistentcy is perfeckshon."

Master is never wrong.

 

So I write.

More and more.

 

"Get it perfeckt or I'll hit you again."

"Daniella, please..."

 

Master begs with me.

So I shall write.

 

Perfeckt.

Perfeckt.

Perfeckt.

 

"Daniella..."

"Yes Master?"

"Be perfeckt."

 

Master begs with me.

So I shall write.

 

Perfeckt.

Perfeckt.

Perfeckt.

 

Perfeckt.

 

Consistency is perfeckshon.

I, Daniella, must be perfeckt.

 

I, Daniella, must be consistent.

Consistency is perfeckshon.



© 2011 Emunah June.


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Another great chapter! My blood is starting to boil, and I really want to skip ahead to the next chapters! I like the use of the word 'consistency'. It not the same old drab (and very overused), practice makes perfect. I really want to know the purpose of all this...and what will happen to Daniella.... OK.. next chapter!

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a good write. I love the consistency of her writing that is not spelled correctly. Practice does make perfect, but what the master doesn't seem to understand that nobody is ever going to be perfect. So he wants perfection, but he won't get it since nobodies perfect. Can't wait to read on. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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