Unknown Love

"There are always times when we feel some thing about people but, are unsure what to call that feeling."

There are words that can't be said

And things that cant be told

There is feeling that cant be felt
And relations unknown

 

There is love in every heart

And love in every soul

There is someone in every life

Whom u can love more

 

More than anything, more than your own

More than all desire, and treasures of the world

And more than your reasons, more than your soul

 

Every time you see her, your heart skips a beat

Every time you think, you smile cause it feels

Like you are in heaven, and you are above all

And there is nothing else you desire more 

Than being with her every day and night

Hugging her whenever she cries

 

Seeing the smile run across her face

And loving her with the love that never fades

Its wonderful time like a fairy tale

Where she is your princess and you are her mate

 

I want to feel the same emotion, running through my veins

When I saw you this is the thought that came

I wrote it on paper and song it became

A song only for you, only whom I love 

You are the only who completes my world

 

I love you, love you a lot

Waiting for you, to come in my life

So that my life could be complete

Complete with you, that's all I need

 

There are words that can't be said

And things that cant be told

There is feeling that cant be felt
And relations unknown.

Reviews

[Becky]

This is a very popular topic, and now I doubt I will ever be able to read a poem sort of like this one without remembering this one. Great wording. The opening two stanzas set up the scene well and the last stanza really left a lingering sense of anticipation. Nice write!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

I am glad you liked it :) thank you

[selkietales]

So cute XD and very well done~ I like the second stanza best.

[natzky]

...this is really awesome...
searching for one true love is a long journey...heheh..:)

[Brandon Mathis]

i love how you write it's similar to my poems in a good way, lol. But i hope you read some of my newest work please

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you Lagachu :) I am happy to make you feel that way through my writing

[Lagachu]

love is something everyone can relate to and so when i read this poem, i felt that it was like a mirror held it front of my face...

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Oh dear! my bows of thanks to you, @Atiba this is such a respect and I hope I will keep on writing my best to never let your believes down.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you @Btwixer :)

[Btwixer]

deep piece, but so well expressed.