adjectives lost

adjectives lost



you split my infinitive

i became a preposition with no object
of attention,
thus my sentence is forever
intransitive

and i no longer have use for the verb
"to-love."




erin-cilberto
11/12/15

Reviews

[Zugzwang]

I like the wordplay on grammar rules. Forever intransitive! The irreverence belies the dark tone of the subject matter, which is something I appreciate. There is something masterful about this.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your review, Zeitnot...

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

The Romans and their rules … the empire long since crumbled … yet they hang onto infinitives. Clever write, Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Pryde.


j.

[Ayushi Jha]

A prodigious work!
Much kudos to you :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words,
j.

[alifeacoustic]

A wonderfully creative take on past/ present tense. What we were and what we are now to someone, as well as ourselves.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, alife.

j.