Clairvoyant

Clairvoyant 

 

 

dust to dust

his smile,

the deep set eyes

the bones of a man

the structure of the face

dust to dust

voice of ash

still resonates from the churning urn

the fiery manner,

discerning 

the feeling of a Father's love

deeply set in a heart

and in the bones of a son.

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/4/17

Reviews

[Corset]

I was very moved by this work J, as I do not remember the face of my mother, but I remember my sisters and they say she looked most like her. But sometimes when I look in the mirror, I can't help but wonder how much of her is there.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for sharing, Corset...

we were best buddies as well...as father/son---
read morethank you for sharing, Corset...

we were best buddies as well...as father/son---
j.

[Troy Henson]

This one certainly tugged on my heart strings, Jacob. your father will forever live on through you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is a kind thing to say, Troy...i appreciate it.
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

The love you shared with your father will never turn to ashes or dust. It is golden and stays with you forever. May memories be a blessing to you, Jacob. Heartfelt emotions in this one. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kindness, Lydi.

j.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Memories remain in the minds eye and so do emotions. As is your want Jacob you present your ideas in a well structured, flowing piece with excellent visual and emotional triggers.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, John.
j.

[DIVYA]

So deeply moving, so profound. The love is all that remains.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, DIVYA...
j.

[Ken Simm.]

It was the line resonates from a churning urn that nailed it for me Jacob. The memory of such love is very valuable. Hang onto it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Ken.
j.

[Ted Kniffen]

Love is surely the one thing we have that survives death.
We cope in many ways, but the solace we find in Father's love is the constant we need to deal with loss.
Good one, j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Ted.
j.