when paid in full

when paid in full


overdue you,
there will be fines to pay

a contrition of kisses tendered
embraces in tandem

the waiting,
love's hour, confined minutes
into anticipation's bank note

something borrowed,
the lien on my heart----

you are the balance.



erin-cilberto
4/6/17

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

lots of love overtones here j, the interest, the balance, the deliverance, the expected charge, the trial, the money back, the refund and all payments in love accepted. haha i liked this j, love has more layers than an onion and do we get to the core!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and those onions as they peel do bring the tears, don't they?
thanks, andrew.

[Cryingkate]

Wow The Poem the review and reply . Awesome !

[Gee]

And as they say in show biz circles, "that's shallot !!! "

[Sami Khalil]

"anticipation's bank note

something borrowed,
the lien on my heart--"

[Sami Khalil]

Banking on love or buying and selling promises. I hope there will not be a hold up and injuries. The escape car is waiting outside. An excellent write, sir....:)...........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the smile with your kind words, Sami.

j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Relic]

There are times when we'd like to renew, not able to forget what was.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

true, true...thank you, Relic.

j.