undressing my world

undressing my world

 

 

comment on a poem

reserve comment on life

 

dissonant sentences

fighting ugly

 

reviewed exposure

isn't it enough to bare?

 

love hates itself

hate loves itself

 

in your world,

the one Atlas dropped on my toes.

 

 

erin-cilberto

6/30/2021

Reviews

[Lorry]

There are too many who too loudly take aim and do nothing but deflect their own tragic ineptitude on others. A perfect example of how calm speaks louder than the eternally angry kid who throws his toys out of the pram huffily, which only gives the rest of us free toys 😊 maybe a moment in the quiet room with bouncy wallpaper and wraparound coat will put their gas at a peep (fingers, knees and toes crossed) 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, a moment in the quiet room...makes sense.
thank you, Lorry.
j.