hate is a shot star

hate is a shot star

 

 

prejudiced b******s

lie face up in the street

as God looks down 

and tears smear the blood 

of their hearts

 

Different rainbows

fly in the sky

because the rain admonished

love in cumulus disperse

averse truce

 

the verses worn out now

coming to an end,

still grudging different

and God still looks down

the blood smear, wider now.

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/2/21

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Jacob, this is a real, honest, raw piece of poetry. Deep thoughts, put down in poetic style. The dark and the light are never far apart. Have a wonderful Wednesday....Mike.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, this poor guy was hoping for at least one response, and he got it.
thank you for your words on this piece, Mike.
Have a wonderful Wednesday, yourself!
j.

[shadrach hah]

You are welcome Jacob. I have found this many times. I have thought I have poured my heart into a piece and no one drops near. I feel sad in those moments. Will soon happen here, I am still new. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always....Mike.