Haiku # 187

Haiku # 187

 

 

light-footed foxes

pirouetting in the sun

red dare, incited

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/12/22

Reviews

[keith]

in the winter months i sit out early pre pre dawn around 4 or so with the firepit alive and warming
the owls are a magical symphony with their back-and-forth conversation
many times a large red fox comes by and sits on the perimeter of light and it listens while i talk
there is an abandoned barn behind my piece of the woods where each spring 2 or 3 females raise their kits
a never ending nature documentary

this piece brings joy of remembrance ... thanks jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your kind words and sharing that story, keith,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Timid creatures really seen in the light. I see many coming home from work in the early hours and it makes sense because the rabbits are about at night.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,
j.

[William Michael Reeves]

You dare the Fox to dance in the sun. You incite the sun to lift the Fox. You dance with the fox in the light of bravado. You spin the sun to catch the fox's tale. The things we can do with our pens! Write on ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Bill,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Red foxes....I remember seeing them sunning themselves in our yard in NJ. They are quite graceful. Great scene conjured here. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

had a family of them a few years ago living down my hill.
they are beautiful...
thank you, Lydi.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Such a wicked cool image you invoke with this; the red foxes dancing and spinning around the sun. They say those foxes are sly and elusive. Maybe they can catch the sun where others have failed. I enjoyed! F.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Fabian...
j.

[Cherrie]

Foxes at play what a tranquil scene

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Cherrie,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

You gifted me a scene of delight Jacob. You took me somewhere else entirely for a few moments, and how I enjoyed that. Love foxes. We have visits in my street late at night, we are very near open countryside.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I bet that is so cool to get those visits...I had a family of reds that lived just down my hill...they are so beautiful.
j.

[Miss Sharon]

(light-footed foxes pirouetting in the sun) What a lovely image that creates in my mind! ~Sharon

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Sharon,
j.