the looking glass

the looking glass

 

 

carbonated cab

bubbling exhaust fervor

fare sips scenery

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/27/22

Reviews

[DIVYA]

I thought of a lovely ride through the countryside. Full of fizzing fervour and sizzling scenery. Such great imegery.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

There's nothing like sipping a bit of breathtaking scenery. I enjoyed. F.

[Nisreen]

Funny how sight works
Seeing through gloom and doom
The price paid for anything we miss seeing

Very insightful

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Nooni,
j.

[Richard🖌]

well i'll just be damned
i would not believe it's true
a senryu from you

Seeing as how it's New Year's week, this could be a paying customer riding in a cab sipping carbonated Champagne while passing all the celebration excitement on the city streets, all viewed through a Champagne glass and/or cab window.
But, that could just be my imagination fumbling to interpret your creative work … I hear your amused giggle! : )

Never a boring moment reading you, Jacob.
"HAPPY NEW YEAR, SYR!" ⁓ Richard🖌

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Richard...
Haiku and Senryu I often write...probably the only form for me...I appreciate your visit.
j.

[Richard🖌]

You should expand your skills sometime, with a few new forms.
'Twas a pleasure.

[Lisasview]

Oh, another clever one Jacob.
Love the line
Fare sips scenery…
Lisa, now in Spain

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks Lisa...
hope you feel better.
j.

[Lisasview]

Yes, I do and am excited to get va k to writing!😍

[John the Baptist]

I don't think this is an ode to the internal combustion engine. It's not only sipping the scenery, it's inhaling it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, John,
j.

[willweb]

Wow, that was a trip, this could be one you remember or one you never return from. Either way, the meter of this is what adds up for me. : )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, will,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

The effervescent moments will soothe our Soul… and bring a Song 🎶 of Reconciliation… the future is forecast.. Blessings, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like that....you softly touch my poems with your kind words,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

If we can Imagine … we are halfway there… with time to spare… Happy New Year 2023… our friend and poet Emeritus. Pat

[Red Brick Keshner]

Being carbonated may refer to carbon-based entities that traverse this existence which is far more suited than the carbonated beverages we call soda pop colas. But the effervescent rolling scene is very catching. Bubble and fizz on this new year! Cheers and a blessed new year to you J!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you nailed it, Red Brick...thank you and Happy New Year to you.
j.

[Soren]

I love Haikus and this one was different than any I have read. I loved the originality. It provides an interesting image.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Soren,
j.