senryu #644

senryu #644

 

 

 

 

blond wisp of a girl

lying on turned maple leaf

autumn's endeavor

Reviews

[poetgurl]

Quite intrigued by this write, This is very well put

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Meg.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

A turning of a new leaf, a new beginning perhaps.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, andrew,
j.

[Weeping willow]

Enchanting words as images come to mind of blowing leaves along the road ;-] Simple little words that bring so much to my mind.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, willow,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Maple leaves in autumn surely create spectacular imagery and must bring reminders of people and places much loved. Your Vermont came to mind here J.

Beautiful.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

You know me too well...that is my place.
j.

[DIVYA]

Nature is such a deft, imaginative and beautiful artist. And so is your pen, dear jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Divya,
j.

[Dave Brown]

A real little beauty
Having done 644 is a huge contribution

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Dave,
j.

[Stu. T.H.]

Seasons are best flavoured with humane company, I hope you had a good Autumn, author Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Stu...
Autumn is the best season, always.
j.