Disclamer

Disclamer

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

Disclamer


please ignore the spilling errers
in this pome.

just read it for continent
I had a dictionery once
but it got ruined in my flood
of thoughts

poetery is about feelings
not tecknikal stuff

mispellings our part of life
poetrey is life

and I right what I fill

nothing more.


erin-cilberto
3/15/24

© 2024 jacob erin-cilberto


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So funny, Jacob! This delivers on multi levels!
JD

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

thanks JD....
j.
Jacob,

Clever, witty, humorous, and ingenious all in one well spit parkage ...

Moive

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

thank you, Marve,
j.
This reads like the writer is trying their best to write in the middle of some kind of episode.
I kinda like that.
I like the use of "fill" instead of feel..at the end. Feels more true to the soul. Like you are "filling" with your feelings.
I like that.

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

Thank you, light,
j.
light and ashes

3 Months Ago

:) .......


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mou
I come across this kind of beauty for the first time...
'...but it got ruined in my flood
of thoughts...'
Wow. Lovely!!
-mou.

Posted 3 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Months Ago

Thanks, mou,
j.
I have done "pomes" like this in the past for effect ... but my favorite part is how readily the mind reads through the errors and gets the meaning with or without technical perfection. ~Jim

Posted 4 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Jim...
j.
Brilliant work. I love it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Interesting. Ahmad Shamlou, an Iranian poet, once wrote a poem like yours.
I hope you're alright and life is treating you well.
Nima

Posted 4 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Months Ago

Life is good, it is just good to still be around...lucky.
thank you, NIma,
j..
Nima.Hope

4 Months Ago

Your welcome, Jacob:)
I am a 51 year old dyslexic English teacher and I applaud you for this poem. My students sometimes ask me while I struggle to spell something on the document camera why I teach English If I suck at spelling. I tell them because I LOVE literature. Your poem encapsulates this. Your lines, "I had a dictionery once but it got ruined in my flood of thoughts" are so beautiful! With your permission, I would love to share your poem with my students to illustrate the point that I want to hears their thoughts when they write even if it isn't perfect as I am receiving so much writing from A.I. instead of them. Thank you for your poem.

Posted 4 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Months Ago

This means a lot, Amanda...your response touches me and yes, of course, share this with your student.. read more
Poetery is life; misss-pellings are rife. I like this one.

Posted 4 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Andrew...and thank you for your wonderful readings of "the path" and "away"-
I’m old school. Spelling is important. A message here for all who think it doesn’t count. Conveyed with both humour and creativity. Well done j. A little gem coming from a teacher.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Chris...
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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