Remaining Days

Reviews

[James Hanna-Magill]

Dear She Loves The Sea

There is something I have often found with writing (and I have been published with it though for nugatory fees I gave to charity)and that is that really you do not have to use lots of words to make an impact.

I have written stories, on here, of exactly 60 words. That can take a lot more time than 1,000. It takes dsicipline as every word has got to serve a valid purpose or be dropped on the cutting room floor. I have even written a 60 word (again exactly) story placed on my portfolio here: Journey which is one 60 word sentence.

Inevitably this comment will be longer than your sentence. But:

1) I admire your bravery;
2) One sentence can say more than many. Yours does. At times there can too much noise and complication in many; and
3) Its message for me (you are talking to me, us all one at a time)? Time is short. There is so much to say, to feel, to express within the limits prescribed by our mortality. And yes it does ache, that we are so confined.

A personal well done.

I look forward to reading more.

My little take and comments, such as they are worth.

With my kindest regards as ever

James

[Ae Pen]

Hello there! Thank you very much!