Secret Love

Secret Love

A Poem by Hannah Messer
"

Something quick I did, not sure how I feel about it. Definitely not my best, but it's something I guess.

"
If I said I love you,
would you say it back to me?
I've sat for hours,
imagining it,
too scared to try and see.
Don't want to tell you how I feel,
for fear you'll turn me down,
but if I don't,
I worry things will never turn around.
If I say I love you,
please don't answer with a lie.
Don't be too shy for honesty,
to make me sad or cry.
I want your love,
your heart and soul,
but only if you choose.
Since I don't really have you now,
I've got nothing to lose.
If I said I love you,
would you say it back to me?
I guess I'll work the courage up,
to set that secret free.

© 2012 Hannah Messer


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

wow.......
awesome.......very nice............
heart breakable kid..............
89/100


Posted 6 Years Ago


Such an amazing and emotional read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful.So much emotion expressed and the frustration and hesitation of confessing to someone you like... Good job. ^_^

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lovely poem. I've got nothing to say about the meaning, because it's just that wonderful (since love is such a pure poetry subject), but I do want to compliment you on your structure. It flows nicely, tumbling off the tongue. Nice work, you have a talent. Merry Christmas.

Posted 6 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

267 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on December 20, 2012
Last Updated on December 20, 2012
Tags: poetry, secret, love

Author

Hannah Messer
Hannah Messer

Pittsburgh, PA



Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Blind Eyes Blind Eyes

A Poem by Frieda P