Hurt

How does it feel to be labled as

'The shy girl'

 

Another day goes by

As people enjoy

Their daily lives

You try to speak in front

Of a huge group of people

 

You feel scared and too afraid

To even say a word

You just want to prove them wrong

 

You want them to see

That you can be more

Than what you seem

 

They underestimate you

They bring you down

They say you'll never do it

 

You just want to show them

That you are more

Than what they judge you as

You just want to prove them wrong

 

You have your own group of friends

But even they judge you as those things

They're not real friends at all

But yet you still stay

 

They see you

They say hi

You don't know if you should answer

For they were the ones who brought you down

But you don't blame them

 

You blame yourself for being so stupid

And useless

 

They make you sad

They make you cry

Yet you still stay

Even though you know

No matter what

Things will always be this way

 

You try your best

But they just bring you down

With rude comments

They don't try to apologize

They just keep making you cry

 

You just hurt so much

You don't to be hurt

So you just want to prove them wrong

 

You keep trying with all your heart

But nothing ever changes

They still bring you down

They still make you hurt

 

But yet for some reason

You stay

You don't want to go

You're afraid of being alone

So you just stay

And you always pray

 

They just keep bringing you down

They just keep making you cry

You stay anyways

Even though you know that

Things will only change

If you decide to leave

 

If you change your mind

You can change the way

Things go everyday

 

They hurt you

You hurt yourself

 

For leting them do and say

Those things that make you cry

You hurt your own self

Because you didn't want to leave

You were too afraid of being alone

 

They make you hurt

They still make you cry

 

And still to this day

They still make you hurt

But for some reason

You still stay

Author's Note

I kinda wrote this about myself, comment please.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Few people have skill as a speaker at the beginning. Take practice and experience. I have been speaking for 32 years. At the beginning I was concern for error and mistakes. Being the shy girl can be OK. Most people who always are talking are saying not too much. People who speak with a reason and purpose get respect. A interesting poem. Life is learning. I'm still learning at my old age. A true friend will cheer for you when you win or lose.
Coyote

[Matthew Kult]

I am sorry people make you feel this way, I use to be really shy and too myself. But it doesn't matter what people think of you, and you shouldn't allow their ignorance to make you cry, but it is all easier said then done.

regards,

Matthew

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. It reminds me of some of the things that I go through on a daily basis. I cry at night because of all the hurt feelings I have during the day. Though during the day I can fool everyone into thinking I'm happy though I'm really depressed and sad. People can't see through me at all. That is the sad thing about that. I know where you are coming from. Thanks for sharing.

[KaySea]

wow. love it

[Sports Girl]

A little long but it was still good. People do this to themselves all the time. Its hard to speak out

[My Fair Lady]

Another powerful work. I know personally the courage it takes to get enough strength to leave when yu have figured out that you are in a relationship that doesn't work. Friends can hurt us the most because they know the most about you and have learned the things that trigger that hurt. I liked the concept here. I thought that it was too repetative however. I think you can get away with removing some of the repeated lines and still get your message across in a powerful and meaningful way.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, very interesting poem, but it sounds great, nice

[loowzerX]

Definitely an interesting poem. :)