I Vow - Love Tenderness

Vows that I always keep !!

I Vow - Love Tenderness

I vow,
To love you always,
To be at your side when needed
To be a part of your sadness &
To be your happiness always

I vow,
To be your true companion
To be a true daughter for a family
To be a true friend with tenderness &
To be your pleasing rest place

I vow,
To adore you like a baby
To hug you when there's fall
To support you at your peak &
To love you more of all

I vow,
To help your love life
To hold you with patience that love demands
To speak when words are needed &
To share the silence at its peak

I vow,
To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm
To live within the warmth of your heart &
To call it always my heaven

I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Author's Note

May be you found errors or tiring style or repetition but this piece .... I have much strong bonding with this piece of mine. These are not just words but a real commitment and I wrote this when actually I am realizing all these vows.

Reviews

[Anahat]

Aww...that was so beautiful...
Well penned...cheers
-Love Anahat :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Anahat for stopping by :)

[stars are far]

aww that very sweet,, and well done ;)

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[Ayushi]

I loved the last line most of all because it is quite easy to say things and stand by someone's side for a while. But keeping those words forever is real love.
Lovely write :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ayushi for such sweet words :)

[priya]

Truly amazing Eve. Adding it to my favourites. :)

[Eve Ola]

aww thank you my pleasure dear :)

[priya]

you are welcome dear. :)

[Luissanto]

Wow, truly amazing, insightful and beautifully written. I truly wish the whole world
could read your words and take them to heart. Your words touched me...
You are truly a great writer.
Thank You

[Eve Ola]

thanks a lot for such a sweet and encouraging feedback. Thanks a lot :)

[The Quill]

amazing one again..feelings are knit with fibers of words..beautiful

[Eve Ola]

your words are really appreciating and encouraging Thank you

[Avinash]

its beautiful...what else anyone needs other than those vows becoming life.

[Eve Ola]

yeah .. Thanks :)

[stars are far]

aww that was so sweet,
you did a great job here..
well done :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks dear em glad u like that :)

[Konigin]

This is beautiful Eve. What a lucky person. :) It brought a smile to my face, and warmed my heart to read this. Lovely pen dear! ^,^

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :) n no I am lucky to have him :)

[Konigin]

You are welcome ^,^ I'm happy for you! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

These are vows that should be written down and kept for your wedding one day when you're ready. This is amazing. It is so sweet, passionate, and determined. The determination is to keep these vows for as long as you're with this person. This type of style makes me smile and keeps my heart in a joyous beat. A love like this should be adored and envied by others. Love like this is hard to find these days. Don't take these moments for granted. Let these memories and moments inspire your work. Outstanding job. Adding to my favorites. :)

[Eve Ola]

Wow you make me feel great :) Its my fvourite poem I ever wrote n I always keep my words as I said. Your feedback is highly apperciated thank you so much for such nice words :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You are very welcome. No problem. :)