I Vow - Love Tenderness

Vows that I always keep !!

I Vow - Love Tenderness

I vow,
To love you always,
To be at your side when needed
To be a part of your sadness &
To be your happiness always

I vow,
To be your true companion
To be a true daughter for a family
To be a true friend with tenderness &
To be your pleasing rest place

I vow,
To adore you like a baby
To hug you when there's fall
To support you at your peak &
To love you more of all

I vow,
To help your love life
To hold you with patience that love demands
To speak when words are needed &
To share the silence at its peak

I vow,
To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm
To live within the warmth of your heart &
To call it always my heaven

I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Author's Note

May be you found errors or tiring style or repetition but this piece .... I have much strong bonding with this piece of mine. These are not just words but a real commitment and I wrote this when actually I am realizing all these vows.

Reviews

[Saddam]

I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!

Great poetry. I never expect such a beautiful but vow. Keep them dear forever!!!!

[Eve Ola]

yeah surly I will. Thanks for liking :)

[Madalyn Beck]

This is so beautiful. A love like that is something powerful and worthy of anyone's heart. You have a lucky man to have you loving him like this. Stunning, dear!! I adore this write! xo (:

[Eve Ola]

Thank you so much madalyn. Your words are so sweet n I am happy you liked this. Thanks for reviewing :)

[Mirra]

I find this sweet ^_^ Whoever this is for, he's a lucky person :-) We have millions of things we want to promise to our loved ones and you wrote everything that should be vowed. Thank you for sharing this one. It made me smile especially the last lines.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks dear Your kind words are much apperciated. keep reviewing. Thanks again :)

[Mirra]

You're welcome :-D

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for love. We need to make vows and keep them. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Coyote for such praising words about my work & thanks for reviewing my all work, you really made my day, as I am new to this site. Thanks again :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed your poetry.

[A. Amos]

Now this is what I call madness of love, every man dream someone write such words for him...lucky is the guy whom you wrote for! Mind blowing and epic!

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Amos for reading and the positive comment. I do appreciate the words you said that I really required :) Keep reviewing :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend and you keep writing:)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So beautiful and Touching.


Simply Beautiful lines all of them.


I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all I said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!



Thank you for this Heart warming lovely piece.

Blessings. Kindred poet

[Eve Ola]

thank you so much kindred your feedback n kind words are much apperciated. Thanks Again :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. It's my Pleasure. blessings. kindred poet