Pushing me away

Pushing me away

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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Being in love.feeling pushed away.Out of your love life.

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I feel like I'll never know you.
If you keep pushing me away.
The closer I come .
The further you push me away.
You interest me.
With that amazing smile.
Coming from a million stars.
We are meant to be.
Love is gonna set  my heart  a blaze.
The blaze will only come from that smile.
 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Fanciful Goddess


Author's Note

Fanciful Goddess
Dont judge my editing skills please.

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This is filled with emotion I like it.
Well written as well

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm speechless, really. So far, this is my favorite out of all your poems. The emotion in it is great and so is the story. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is good stuff. Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


This nearly made me cry! It's exactly how I feel about my best friend... Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Fanciful Goddess
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