Memorable Days

The most amazing and memorable days of my life in school with my best friends...

My friends you are my blanket during the winter
You are my ice cubes during summer
Someday when I am alone
I think of all those days gone

Since I keep thinking of those lovely days
They seem like those bright sun rays
Those days I shall treasure
Be it today or forever
Just call on me when in need
You can call me selfish, or it might just be my greed
My life shall be your's ever
I shall not forget you ..nahh...never..

Love for me is you all
Without whom I am sure to fall
Support me through my lonely days
Help me through my naughty ways
I shall be your's now and then
Never ask when
For you know am your's only lady like friend...:)

Reviews

[afra]

Great write ..... I love my friends too ..well done

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[MOON]

Lyrical write

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[ShadowFaux]

I loved the first stanza but it made less sense to me as i read on. The last line especially.

[Cerise]

Thankyou..i have written about how i felt as i left my school life and moved on..and last stanza the lady like friend thats what they used to call me with..:)..i hope i cleared few confusions....I only have memories and that's what i tried to share of the wonderful days passed by.:)

[Mia]

"My friends you are my blanket during the winter
You are my ice cubes during summer"
I LOVE the beginning it is so wonderful. This is sweet. I agree with Belinda...I hope they know how lucky they are to have you as a friend!

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou so much..:D

[B-poet]

Great poem. I applaud your eloquence and written rhyming style. It's a wonderful experience in life to cherish the company of true friends as we make our journey's through life's territories. Exquisite penmanship as well. :)

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your kind and wonderful words..:D..they meant a lot to me..:)

[Tina Kline]

A wonderful poem showing how much you appreciate your friends and how important they are too you. Sometimes people need to hear how important they are. Fantastic tribute poem.

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou soo much..your words meant a lot..:)

[Belinda]

This is sweet. I love how you write things for your friends. I hope your friends know how lucky they are! Good read.

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou....nops..more than them i am lucky to have them..without them i dunno where i had be..:D...

[sierrasparks91]

nicely written it has a good flow to it great job

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[TheJordBaker]

I love the way this is written, nice and uplifting too!!

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D..i am glad u liked it..:)