Feelings

feelings poured out during some terrible times.

I don't know what is going on

Life is so uncool

What the heck is wrong

Something is amiss

Something is truly gone......

The reason of my living seems to fade

There in an uncontrollable rage

I fear for the war in my heart and mind

I was always known to be sweet and kind.....

The days have changed, I feel estranged

The tears are waiting to run down my cheek

The torture and pain makes my future looks bleak

There is a stillness that gives me fright

Lord only knows what has gone wrong or right....

I hope to see a spark of life

Panache, vitality, glimmer and desire

Far away from doubts and strife

Looking at a new day with bright sunshine

Hoping that we all will one day redefine

The reason of our living and our screwed up time.....

Author's Note

please feel free to tell me your opinion

Reviews

[Ees]

typo: "The torture and pain makes my future looks bleak"- no need for the 's' on looks.

Nice poem. A whole bunch of feelings. I like the way that you transformed what looked like was going to end in despair into something so hopeful at the end, as if knowing that the reason for all the terrible s**t exists somewhere in there.

Great job

[Cerise]

Thank you for wonderful review..:)

[Moniba]

Haaye that happens so often... I wish you better days. I liked the poem btw:)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Kawaiikitty96]

Awesome! My favorite line is, "The days have changed, I feel estranged."

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[AleyshaRosa]

God, I love it. It had the casualty of thoughts, but the poetry of pain.

Koodoos

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for your wonderful opinion...:)..it meant a lot

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A lot gathered into this poem from you. An emotional write, thank you for sharing.

[Cerise]

thank you for your review..:)

[Stanley Wilson]

emotive write deep and crafted well

[Cerise]

Thank you....:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very emotional write, has a deep meaning to it and your letting your feelings flow.
I loved it the rhymes where great to :)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[David Scott]

Feelings...
Everything and nothing all at the same time.
What a fine mess indeed.
I think you conveyed your feelings well.

[Cerise]

thankyou sir for your kind words

[gombeggar]

u put out a good expression here...don't think u need the pic at the end...think it detracts from yer work...but it's up 2 u in the end

[Cerise]

Thank you for your opinion..:)