Feelings

feelings poured out during some terrible times.

I don't know what is going on

Life is so uncool

What the heck is wrong

Something is amiss

Something is truly gone......

The reason of my living seems to fade

There in an uncontrollable rage

I fear for the war in my heart and mind

I was always known to be sweet and kind.....

The days have changed, I feel estranged

The tears are waiting to run down my cheek

The torture and pain makes my future looks bleak

There is a stillness that gives me fright

Lord only knows what has gone wrong or right....

I hope to see a spark of life

Panache, vitality, glimmer and desire

Far away from doubts and strife

Looking at a new day with bright sunshine

Hoping that we all will one day redefine

The reason of our living and our screwed up time.....

Author's Note

please feel free to tell me your opinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I do leave the piss-off woman alone. They can be very dangerous. Nice flow of thoughts leading to the good wisdom at the end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you so much for such wonderful words..:)

[icelandicblue]

The poem speaks to pain and it's power to destroy or motivate. I think your icon at the bottom says it all. You might want to revisit the first line and change wat to what if that was the word you were going for.

[Cerise]

Ahh...thank you so much...ya i wrote that by mistake..:)