Longing

Longing

A Poem by Farjana Shah Chaity
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Free verse

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Longing

Rainy days are romantic for lovers.
But, What about those who are lonely? Alone? 
Those are drowning in their thoughts, 
Raindrops fall like tears, unseen.

Longing for the one, for whom they hide.
Flashes of the past,a haunting rhyme. 
Echoes of laughter,frozen in time. 
Rainy days paint a canvas of sorrow.

© 2023 Farjana Shah Chaity


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.. there is much to be said about rainy days .. and here you have said much of it .. sadly enjoyed :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farjana Shah Chaity

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your words!
Each phrase is the truth, these especially, my fine poet friend,

'Echoes of laughter,
frozen in time.
Rainy days paint a canvas of sorrow.'


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farjana Shah Chaity

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
An insightful piece of truthful poetry. Love and sorrow are not often exclusive. I feel they go hand in hand together. For in order to love one must be ready to lose. A wonderful piece Farjana.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farjana Shah Chaity

9 Months Ago

Thank you, I appreciated it.

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Added on August 12, 2023
Last Updated on September 28, 2023
Tags: Love, longing, loneliness, rain, raining, night

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Farjana Shah Chaity
Farjana Shah Chaity

Bangladesh



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Hello there, this is Farjana. A writer driven by a profound passion for the written word. Writing has been my solace and companion since I can remember, allowing me to escape to reality and unlock the.. more..

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