Sing my song

Sing my song

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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comprehend while reading each and every line

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Sing my song...
For it can disperse your pain like those milky white pearls and
transform your agony into an alluring pearlescent,lustrous garland
wearing which you will depart to a world unanticipated.

My song has immutable ingredients of eternal sunshine,beauteous flowers and whizz.
My song has the protection of a brother for his sweet sister,the responsibility of a father for his princess daughter,
the love of a husband for his adorable wife,the care of a mother for her lucky son.
Sing my song and transcend to a world aberrant enough.

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
Thought of composing some lyrics.Hope you will like it

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This is such a sweet song. The next time I see someone sad I'll sing this to them. :) I hope it is released some day for the whole world to hear because everyone needs to hear words like these. Hats off to you for writing such a beautiful song. We need stuff like this these days. Bravo! :))
Besides being comforting, each line is so meaningful. Each line is a complete quote in itself. I liked the way you related your song to natural and beautiful things as well as family attachment. It has everything one needs to make another person feel better and is a beautiful and unique composition. Well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating.This comment is so touching.Glad that there are still some people.. read more
Bushra Naqshbandi

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome. :)

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Added on April 2, 2015
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fattycbreezy52
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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