A conspiracy of optimism

A conspiracy of optimism

A Poem by fattycbreezy52
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What happens when every part of your numb body forms an alliance everyday to make you look optimistic enough and you are defeated,defeated badly in the contest?

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Everyday when I wake up from my deep slumber,
A strong determination is expressed by my bones,muscles,heart and the grey matter.
The confederacy ultimately reaches a goal,
A goal to make me look optimistic enough for the day.

Alas!This federation trounced me,I lay prostrate !
Yes,it happened only in the morning which people wish to be "good"
It was all okay until I actually digested those charitable insults hurled at me 
I managed to fake,yes ,the curve which we all call the "smile"

© 2015 fattycbreezy52


Author's Note

fattycbreezy52
thanks for reading

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This is a good way to look at it and is depressingly humourous in a way.
Only the righteousness-demanding prevent us from optimism; they don't even know they're doing it.

You should start to edit and refine the pieces more; sometimes the presentation conveys it all.
Good write fattyc.. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fattycbreezy52

9 Years Ago

yes,it was depressingly humorous.Just like a pleasant "heartache"(what an oxymoron).Thanks for readi.. read more

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Added on April 17, 2015
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Music,dancing,singing,acting,dubbing,writing and playing with voices are my areas of specialization/existence. Being a Literature student,my love for Keats,Coleridge and Blake led me all the way to t.. more..

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